Life's immortality

by The heart the soul the love   Feb 5, 2006


Light bust through the open door
awakens my dark soul on this old tattered wooden floor
creaking under you feet as you place your weight on the ground
trying your best not to make a sound
crawling slowly into my life just to tare it apart
walking these lines of love just to break my heart
while awakening the demons that were at rest
you distorted my fears that were suppressed
Going through life's immortality
And slowly opening my eyes to reality
these words don't seem to heal
it hurt so much this pain is just to real
the darkness hangs above me demons linger here
and you have just awaken my worst fear
so much pain time can't erase
things not even words and actions can embrace
it will never end
to many pieces to mend
never ending pain
I'm in a mental state, only held back by my brain
I'm on the pathway to hell
Where I wish to someday to comeback and leave my pain to dwell
But for now I can't live without these dreams
All I every hear echoing is horror and frightening screams
You've opened my eyes to reality
Now I'm going through life's immortality

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem def 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by katie hensley

    Once again...very powerful. i love the way you write. raw emotion is key. 5/5
    -k-

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    This is an amazing poem so sad and meaningful i loved every bit of it.

    crawling slowly into my life just to tare it apart
    walking these lines of love just to break my heart

    My favortie part i dunno why but i loved it it was so deep and i can relate to these lines the most. great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That's a very sadning poem to me,
    it made me see something that I didn't want to see,
    and now that you've showed me what I thought would never be,
    my thoughts will forever be a fading memory,
    until my final rest in the world of eternity.

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    That's a very sadning poem to me,
    it made me something that I didn't want to see,
    and now that you've should me what I thought would never be,
    my thoughts will forever be a fading memory,
    until my final rest in the world of eternity.

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