This is real good, i like it. it has a meaning to it, you just have to dig deep to get it. keep it up.

That's a very sadning poem to me,
it made me something that I didn't want to see,
and now that you've should me what I thought would never be,
my thoughts will forever be a fading memory,
until my final rest in the world of eternity.

That's a very sadning poem to me,
it made me see something that I didn't want to see,
and now that you've showed me what I thought would never be,
my thoughts will forever be a fading memory,
until my final rest in the world of eternity.

This is an amazing poem so sad and meaningful i loved every bit of it.

crawling slowly into my life just to tare it apart
walking these lines of love just to break my heart

My favortie part i dunno why but i loved it it was so deep and i can relate to these lines the most. great job.

Once again...very powerful. i love the way you write. raw emotion is key. 5/5
-k-

Great poem def 5/5 keep writing and take care hun sarah x