Comments : Her Little Secret

  • 11 years ago

    by ||.SamanthA.||

    Beautiful poem. So sad, yet so true. Ahh, perfection..something we try so hard to grasp, yet are never happy when we seem to have it. You expressed the hunger pain beautifully, and the excuses about a big breakfast are known all too well. Lovely work. I'm a big fan, though I really don't know why I've never commented before! Silly me..hehe. Good job hun, keep up the brilliant rhyme scheme and the flow that you always seem to master!

    love,
    sam

  • 11 years ago

    by Tisha

    Awww, this is another sad one.Where do you get your ideas from ?..just wondering.I just wish I was half as talented as you.

    your friend ,
    Tisha~

  • 11 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    What a sad poem...and sadder yet the commentary on a society that pushes people to do this. Beautifully put.

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    That is so sad and so true of many today who starve themselves on purpose, at the expense of being healthy.

    You have so many ideas for writes and they are always very unique, well done.

    Best regards,

    Steve

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this is just so unique..u wrote it so beautifully.
    loved it
    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Bethan

    Tough subject...gr8 poem!!! It gives us all an insight into what it's like for all those thousands of young girls (and boys) who are suffering day-to-day with the realities of an eating disorder. The poem was brilliant!!!
    Beth xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Bethan

    P.S thx 4 da commen on my work, it is very, very much appreci8d!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Melissa

    WOW, this is amazing! The message, the flow, everything about this poem is perfect! Awesome write!

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Perfection as always, girl! This is so sad, and yet so beautifully written. You have a knack for bringing out human emotions and feelings. Don't lose that.

  • It is a sad poem. but ive been through this 2 or 3 times now and you did an amazing job of capturing it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Kim

    Very nice poem. It's sad, and unfotunately true, great portrayal of it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Shane

    I enjoy the last stanza, the imagery is veru visual.

  • 11 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Alls I've got to say is that is brilliant! =)

    D_P

  • 11 years ago

    by holly

    H.,, wow
    this is so beautifully written!
    you just have such natural talent and you really know what ytour writing about,,
    5/5
    take care

    holly

  • 11 years ago

    by JAYMA SUMMERS

    Wow i loved it what i great poem your a wonderful writer i loved it so much!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Such a sad write...very touching...

    love ya, Ann

  • 11 years ago

    by nO1cOmPaReS2yOu

    This poem amazingly shows emotion and feelings. it's awesome in a sadly depressing but honest way.
    5/5

  • Hun i love dis poem, its so original im sorry u feel this way and u dnt need 2 do that 2 urself plz dont urt urself uni i care about y0o....

  • 11 years ago

    by kallie

    I honestly can't believe your only 15!! you are soo amazing!! wow this poem is so sad i hope its not about you!! if it is you are perfect the way you!! don't try to change it!!! God bless!!

  • 11 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Touching and beautiful! You are one of the more talented people on this site..