Comments : DEATH

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Thanks for the comment, yes sometimes weird is good.

    And about the poem:

    I'm very sorry this happened, butpoem wise this poem rules.

    Except for one part,
    "I didn't even have a chance to say goodbye,"

    I think that is longer than it should be maybe.

    I want a chance to say goodbye

    Or

    Never got a chance to say goodbye

    I don't know.

    Anyways, great poem I really liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!! rythme is perfect...it's perfect...u great writer:)

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Amazing loved it...5\5
    thanks for the commetn by the way
    love dia tc mwaz

  • 18 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Wow....This is an amazing poem you did an awesome job on it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Edgar Mayfield

    Great poem. love the wording. i love reading poems i can relate to. thanx for writing this. you're very talented

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle Wycotte

    Great poem saying it and voteing on it