Comments : The Next Poem I write...

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Great job through your expression..Really Really Deep....Excellnet job..i enjoyed that one
    5/5
    PeAcE
    ~The Poet~

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great peice very well expressed and thought though.

  • That deep. I like how you showed your emotions

  • Wow....im speachless.... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good.. very different, but you did a great job on it. You described everything really well & I love all of the emotions behind it. Great job on this!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats very sad!
    i loved the use of words you put in this poem! wow

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Haven

    I liked it, not entirely perfect, but writing about your next poem isn't exactly te simpliest thing:) 4/5