Sometimes our heart would feel,she is always mine....when in reality,she can never be your valentine...
Beautiful,heart touching poem.....keep writing and keep smiling always....

How much I love you is all i know,
i just feel it and I dont want to show.

I miss you with every beat of my heart, no doubt
you are the only one of whom i can think about.....

beautiful poem........i felt it in my heart too......those lines were my fave.
5/5 keep it up........even though we knw that sumtimes that one person cant ours we shud still keep tryin.....at least that way u knw u gave it ur best shot n tried.

marvellous
take care
sonam

Good work Bharti, as u have already mentioned in your profile our poems are form your heart as to how u feel at that very moment,there remains nothing from my part to say, u have proven your words.

Nice poem! Very sweet and emotional! Really liked it.

Wow. I love it. you're very good at writing poems. keep it up. it's excellent. 5/5.

It;s beautiful girl, u sure improve a lot since the last I've seen of ur poems...good one...definitely a 5

This is beautifully written Bharti. so true of the emotions that run through when in love!

good luck and keep writing
shobhana

My one hand holds the other as it cannot hold yours,
It wanders for only your warm touch , I m sure.

wow Bharti, this is just so amazing yaar.....saawan ka mahina aa gaya hai kya... :o))

all the best and take care
5/5 for sure

This is Hela Good... Keep Up Tha Good work and Keep The Poems Coming!

Hey hey bharti
im glad to be talkin to an indian :D...anyway im another indian on this site....and i absolutely positively love all your poems...specially the hindi ones...theyre written with so much feeling.

abt this poem....missing is a very sad emotion...and i knw im going to miss this one girl in another 10 days...because after that im never in my life going to see her again. i hope goodbye wasnt forever...but it looks like this one is.

anyway, keep writing.
and if u can, please read a few of my poems n temme how u find them. i'd be honoured. :D
Much love, Dhaval

I can relate to this poem...again love it, love it, love it

Hey
havent looked at your poems for a lond time..awesome job..well keep writing darling
cassie*