Hidden Feelings

by Monica AKA Mika   Feb 9, 2006


Sometimes i smile when i wanna frown
You see my chin up but its actually down
You see me laughing but I'm actually down
You see me laughing but really crying
i tell you I'm OK but I'm really lying
you may think that happiness is all i can gain
But if you really looked in my eyes all you would see is pain
I dont want you to see whats really inside
But actually a girl who thinks of suicide
Maybe one day ill tell you or maybe you will find out in another way
Or maybe i want have anything to say
Maybe ill kill myself staring as the ceilings
But for now these are my hidden feelings

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  • 16 years ago

    by Javier

    It was short but i can still feel everything that your saying i love the way you write dont stop your great

  • 16 years ago

    by Riz

    Suicide is never an answer for these problems. I'd rather much slapped a boy for cheating, heck I'll do that for my BF if she get cheat. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    I love this work...beautiful!!The beauty lies in the part where most of the readers of this can relate to this peice of wrk..like me!xD.
    Good wrk!Kp it up!5/5!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Alisha

    Well i guess we really are in the same boat and i'm gonna add you to my faves too

  • 17 years ago

    by No one

    I like it, i think many people can relate to it. =)