Oooooo.... i absolutely love this one....well i love all of your poems....yes i have become a very big fan of yours and im glad you're a fan of mine it makes me feel like ive done a good job at something, you know??like ive accomplished something great....thank you so much for all of your comments on my poems...i have written maybe 2 long ones so far since you suggested it..read them and tell me what you think id really like to hear what youve got to say thnx again!!!!!
your newest fan=]
~Sandra~

Aw wow, this is so cuteee, i had no idea guys out there actually felt like this, aw, so touching and beautiful i lovedd this, well donee

That's a real nice one. great work!

shobhana

Thats sad....but so true. Love the dedication....keep writing ....adn keep sharing ur heart that's wha makes ur's adn everyone elses peoms so unique and so sepcial. :)

LIS

Goodness david!!! that's so cute!!! i really like the ending of it! its' so cute! i give it a 5 all the way!!
~Teardrop~

Hey :)

I thought this Poem was absolutely beautiful and if theirs one thing i love about poetry is that it can touch our hearts even when were in a real dark place, cant help but allow myself to feel the emotions that come with amazing poetry like this. Thanks for writing this and its actually really close to how im feeling this very moment, bit deflated as ive been with Crystal (My fiance) for nearly 7years yet we haven't met but im sure when we do it will be great :) Im very devoted. Amore i love u

Dave that was truely magnificent matey :)

Yeah some guys have feelings, emotions and are purely loyal and devoted to the ones we love and trust me when i say, I love Amore (thats what i call Crystal, my fiancee) And she truely is my everything and without her my life honestly wouldnt be worth living and if it was possible to hand a life to someone in need if ever we did splitup then i seriously would had-it over ... Without love from Amore my heart would truely stop beating :) Love = Living = Life ...

Ooooooooooh !! Just noticed the date stamps on these comments :) Omggggggg !!! Lollllllll ...