Good poem. great job. thanks for the comment on my poem. 5/5.

Very good, i definitely know how that feels but i got over it. i hope you did too. thats for the comment.

Love Always
Kristy

I like this poem. its really good.

Oh and thanks for the comment!

Take care,
--*NaydeeN*

Hey,

Nice poem, I have someone in mind when i think about this, I think every ones does, awesome relatable poem hun=), Thanks for the comment on Don't say etc, *lazy typer sorry* and to tell yeh, It's about my ex boyfriend=) I look forward to reading more from you=)

Jenn x0x0x

Ha. I like this poem because it has both the sorrow for a person leaving and the knowledge that you are better off without them. That is a cool way to write things, and something I found in my own life when my boyfriend left me. I loved him with everything I am and would have willingly died to buy him one more minute of life, seriously. Now as time goes on I am starting to get over him, and see what a wreck of a life he was leading and how be was bringing me so down in life. I get it, I see. Now I feel bad for him more than anything else, though every now and then I miss having someone who loved me. Great poem love.

-Tainted Mikochan

Awsome poem I love it, such a wonderful way of putting it.. It has sadness for both people leaving each other.

Anyway good job!

-Josiah

It was really good. the whole lying to and being walked out on thing gets better right....nice poem

Hey, this is pretty good but just a suggestion where you have
What did I do wrong?
What did I say?
It wasn't long,
That you chose to stay

i thinky uo should put the last two lines together
What did I do wrong?
What did I say?
It wasn't long,That you chose to stay
so it has 3 lines like the rest
otherwise good job
xxALLYxx

Hey, u asked me 2 read this poem, and sorry 4 being so late at doing it, but yea...i liked it a lot! 8-) good work

Wow this is really good!

Loved the poem!! it was wonderfuly expressed, i know how that feels but with my dad, all he does is disappoint me! but with time i got use to it and let it go. hope everything is ok with you!! great poem! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Hey good poem.....no my poem wasnt about suicide....just natural death cause....altho she did help it...she dies of liver and kidney faliure....from smoking to much....so yea its sorta like self suicide...but not really....she was my aunty....my dads aunty so my great aunt...
love Paige
xxoo

Yea, that's how i feel..

Hey this is a realy good poem maybe you could go rread some of mine sometime

*stephanie*

You are good keep it up