Oh JJ, I love this write...... its simply beautiful..... I not only could picture it all but I could feel it all too! Wonderful job!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

JJ, I truly enjoyed this write....beautiful...You painted such a beautiful picture with these words....

love ya, Ann

Excellent! I love the flow and verbage! You did an outstanding job! Beautifully done!

Beautifully done, the flow was fantastic! Wonderful poem!

Oh I love this, it flows so well. I really enjoy the imagery put on display in this as well. Simply outstanding.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Short but yet Powerful and much meaningful..Excellent job..Truly Amazing
5/5
~The Poet~

Excellent! the imagery you evoke through this is simply outstanding! great work.
shobhana

This is a really fun poem! beautifully writen with excelent flow and the pictures i saw were wonderful! one of the best nature poems i've read!

~Jacklyn

You are much better at poems than I
please never stop posting.

That flows so well! Awsome job! I like the comparison you put in there... Poetry, but still sounds as if a beautiful women has swept away your breath under your feet

Oh!!! My, I most say this is a
beautifully passionate written
poem, no doubt. excellent job
and thank you for sharing your
wonderful work, Write On,
Bogie

You remind me of a close friend, each word you have writen is so meaning ful and shows a fab image, well writen and god bless xxxxx

Wow this is absolutely breath taking... exquizette.

Very nice write! i really enjoy it, keep up the good work!
god bless
5/5