Comments : The Mermaid

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie Cook

    This was so cool! I luved it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    I like that, I really do. I like the little tale behind it. Interesting write. And you did great with the flow! =D

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelc

    Very very good. it has great detail and awesome feeling. its impossible to pick a favorite stanza. wee done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Nada

    I liked this poem a lot. I liked how it flowed and the story that was behind it. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    WOW that was a really really good poem i enjoyed reading it

    *~*Jen*~*

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Wow i have no words! That poem is amazing - totally loved it. Such a great story. Definately without any doubt 5/5.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelly

    Wow i have no words! That poem is amazing - totally loved it. Such a great story. Definately without any doubt 5/5.

    Kelly
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    It helps that i love all things mythical,
    but this poem is very beautiful.
    the picture it paints is just amazing!!!
    have a look at my stuff!
    (kat-x-)
    not much yet as i've just joined but
    i really love poetry so there will be more 2 come!!!.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice job. Great imagery and unique story. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This was very good. At the end I wanted it to continue. Wonderful job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Lol it kinda reminds me of the little mermaid on disney channel except it's from the humans perspective first lol. Awesome job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    OH MY GOSH! I LOVED this! I love mermaids, haha. amazing flow, great story and description. only thing i noticed was,

    "realized he's stupid mistake"
    is "he's" supposed to be "his"?

    i'm adding this to my favorites! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    I love this, the end was my favorit becaise i feel like the mermaid and how the others just wanted her beauty and not her love amazing i could relate so much

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    God, I used to love reading pieces like this, I did not realize how much I missed these sort of pieces. I love the description and the story. I love the word choice and how the length wasn't as horrible as it seems just by looking at it. Nice piece. Good job. I like it

    Love,
    Adreamer

  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    This poem is amazing!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    You have described the imaginary so well.
    It sounded so real like one for once I felt I was watching a short movie, like it was happening infront of me.
    I wish for once in life I get a chance to see a mermaid.