Sounds like the message one of my poems (Without Answers) is about. good write. it makes sense ...

keep it up, and stay strong

This does make sense and this relates to how i feel aswell most days but u hav 2 stay strong

Hey this was great!!
hope your ok!
love jessXxXxXxXxX

Thats good i liked it....but ive been through alot too so i know how u feel....and ive thought of death...but i always ending up wondering if theres something better out there...a new life..a new road u can take...theres so many oppurtunities that can make u happy...and suicide, all it does is cut u off of all the chances u have of happiness...and brings u somewhere u will regret...well..im glad i got to read ur poem..5/5 :)

This was a great poem like alot of people said it feels like them and it does i can so relate, very nice hun........xoxo Rach

I can deff. relate very good i loved it!

Luckily it's just a spur of a moment...great poem...I luv the way u uses ur own style in it...yet it rhymes like so very good...me love it...keep it up...u hev a future in poetry...

That was proper good!
I really fancy that it came from your heart..
And those feelings are surreal!

Much ♥

Very expressive and emotional. Like it

The rhymes were a little thrown in it looks like but i still feel the emotion in ur poem. i liked it