Comments : This guy

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    This is great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Aweeee omgoodness. that is so sweet. great poem! : )

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    I got confused...is this like a good love poem you guys ended up together or he left you? either way its a wonderful poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Really good write, I liked the flow. Keep it up. :)

  • Awesome poem.. i love the rythym and the way it just rolls off your tongue. great job i gave u a 5
    ~court

  • 18 years ago

    by Sara

    IN ONE wORd
    **FAbULOUS**
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow i love it it is sooo good your an excellent writer!!

    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wonderful, u have ur own style stick to it, u dont need our advice ur quite good anyway. im not sure but what i gpt from this poem from the way u wrote it andthe things that u sed that u like this guy but dont want to ruin ur friendship? please tell me im now very very curious. well take care and good luck. im sure everythiung will be great.love the poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Hey i love it you have a good style and your flow was good i really felt you in that one xxALLYxx

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Smart poem... filled with love too.. !!
    gave u 5/5
    love
    amy

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    I like this, I mean i really like this, i'm going to write something like this now i just don't know how to start it, i'll figure it out though 100/100 very good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Lanie

    This poem is such a cutie I think it's great! ( ^ - 6 )

  • 18 years ago

    by Newbie

    I loved how everything flowed so nicely.. but i realli got confused near the end.. i love your style and the way you didn't only use words by itself.. its lik.. u're making the words yours and then pourring the words out in another way.. its so hard to explain. but.. i love it =]

  • 18 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Wow... You convey your emotions very well for not actually saying them. Nice job!