This was my favorite poem of yours. And that's saying something because normally I rather write anything that has to do with love then read about it. But you avoided the typical cliches'. (Sorry if I can't spell that) Overall, I think you should just go over your poems and just nitpick somethings and see if that adds more of the effect you wanted.
Reminds me of when Jarrad and I split and both of us where pushing each other away to try and forget how in love we are, in the end it turned out good and we are dating again.
I love this poem seriously. I added you to my Favorites. You are a wonderful writer, and if anyone says you aren't then they can shove a boot up there, uhm.. behind. So used to swearing Rofl.. Great Job Hun. ^^
I like this and think its written in an interesting way -the way the format is slightly different in each line represents scattered thoughts etc. and i like that very much. Nice words and well strung togethor