Comments : Dear Valentine-

  • 11 years ago

    by Emma

    I loved it. writen well that was amazing. great job.

    Emma 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Wow i really can relate to this one..made me tear up a bit cuz its so real to me..But if you can get that kinda emotion forma poem its got to be a truely amazing one that it is..5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Emma

    This is amazing....i love it 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaylee

    This was my favorite poem of yours. And that's saying something because normally I rather write anything that has to do with love then read about it. But you avoided the typical cliches'. (Sorry if I can't spell that) Overall, I think you should just go over your poems and just nitpick somethings and see if that adds more of the effect you wanted.

  • 11 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow i loved this one i agree with my1&only this is my fav poem of yours too!
    great job

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. very well written! the flow and rhyming of it were very good.. keep it up! 5/5
    jessy

  • 11 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Awe that was adorable! SO sad/beautiful/ and cute! A great mix of emotions all in one poem! I loved the format you chose to display this poem and the rhyming was very unique!

  • Loved it, it was written very well!! you r very talented for being 16!!! i added u to my favs!! Great job!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was amazing! I really liked it. The last stanza was awesome aswell. Really brought it all together. Keep up the awesome work. Im lovin' it! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohmy..SadSad.. T_T

    Reminds me of when Jarrad and I split and both of us where pushing each other away to try and forget how in love we are, in the end it turned out good and we are dating again.

    I love this poem seriously. I added you to my Favorites. You are a wonderful writer, and if anyone says you aren't then they can shove a boot up there, uhm.. behind. So used to swearing Rofl.. Great Job Hun. ^^

  • 11 years ago

    by Sondos

    I like this and think its written in an interesting way -the way the format is slightly different in each line represents scattered thoughts etc. and i like that very much. Nice words and well strung togethor

    Sondos

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww.. that is really sad. You did a great job on this. And I could definitely relate to it. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and it's filled with emotions of sadness and love. Great job!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. very nice poem! i really enjoyed reading that.. it had a nice flow and it was very romantic.. it really kept me reading! nice write! 5/5