A Sad Song: My Broken Valentine

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Feb 15, 2006


You're just the salt in the wound of my broken heart
You're just a mass of confusion getting ready to start
You're an ongoing battle of a war already won
You're the loaded silver bullet in my suicide gun
And I'll say "I love you" once again...

You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
And I take it you don't want me back with you again

You used to be my one and only
But now I'm here broken and lonely
While you're hanging out with someone else...
Toss me aside and tear me open
Stole my heart and now it's broken
As I watch you kiss somebody else...

You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
And I take it you don't want to see me near again

You're the poison in my white wine
You're the first star in night's shine
You're the black hole in the back of my mind
You're what I lost and just can't find
And I' m willing to love you again...

You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
And I take it you don't want to think my name again

You're the one I loved for a million reasons
You're the one I need like breathing
But I see you looking in the eyes of someone else...
You're making my life miserable
But you're just so irresistible
But still I cannot be that someone else...

You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
And I take it you don't want to hear my voice again

You're in love and I can't take it
And if you're not you sure can fake it
I see you holding hands with someone else...
I'm holding your valentine
Which is asking you to please be mine
Your face frowns 'cause I'm not your someone else...

You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
And I take it you don't want to see me ever again

My roses fall to the floor
I know you don't care anymore
Why can't I still be that someone else?
I make a beeline for the door
As you pick up the roses from the floor
I used to be that someone else...

You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
And I take it you've denied me once again

You're the poison in my white wine
As I'm begging you to be mine
You're the thing I lost and can't get it back
I close my eyes and it fades to black
And I'll say "I love you" once again...

You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
And I take it you don't want to hold me once again

My heart broke and you're the salt in the wound
By my own love I am entombed
And if this is just a game I guess you've won
'cause you are the loaded silver bullet in my suicide gun
and I'd tell you it again...

You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
And I take it you don't want to accept my love for you again...

You're all that I desire
You're all that I admire
Even though there's someone else...
Baby please accept this rose
And then I'll let love's curtain close
Why can't I still be that someone else?

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  • 10 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    Wow, this poem is amazing. It's filled with so much love. It almost brought tears to my eyes, but I loved it. Keep up the amazing writing. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by brit

    Liked this one 2 :) keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Tamra

    I really liked the repititions in this one, also it had a nice flow. Deep, it really gets the emotions across. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Breana Marie

    Great work keep it up.. *~*Take care*~*

  • 11 years ago

    by Robiie

    Great work

    take care x0x0

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