Awesome. I really loved your poem. :)

I like the last line:) lol..well written, ur emotions are shown and it made me happy lol!

I have read a couple of ur poems, and they are excellent, thankyou for the comment, *comment no 1!* I am glad you enjoyed my quote about slinkies. :D
Keep up the good poetry!

I love this! It's not the stero-typical type of poem you usually see. You can feel your emotions while reading it. Wonderfull! 5/5