Oh dear. You did it again. Such a short piece, but so powerful and meaningful. Don't feel you have to be happy, if you feel sad, then be sad. You don't need to pretend. A lot of people are sad on Valentine's Day, a lot of people have reason, too. You should never have to pretend to be someone/something your not. I hope you're alright, and I hope to talk to you soon. Brilliant, wonderful write, hun. £>. Take care.

Much love,
Mortie.x.

Hello.
The title was VERY catchy, really made me want to see your point of veiw on things, I liked it.

Each stanza had a constant flow and was short, but powerful and showed your emotions. Just how a poem is supposed to be.

You put a bit of humer into it, which was excellent, While being a dope really made me laugh :P

In real life, I say don't give up..Fight for what you believe in but..Valentines day does suck, and many give in onn it.

Well done, This poem was interesting.

Lisa x)

Hey great poet man good job

Impressive. A clearly different view from most and similar to others. Well done.
~FotF

Great job i loved it! keep up the good work!

I agree with them (don't think I'm flirting) it's just a great piece