Comments : The Unnamed Poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Nice poem. Very sad. Well done.

    I can also relate to it. I'm not sure if that's a good thing haha

    I believe it's normal to think about ending your life, when you life is such a mess. But I guess we are still here, sharing our thoughts and feelings in a poetic way. So that a good thing.

    Just keep writing! Well done,
    lotsaa love -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by FASHIONISTA

    This poem is really good. Your way better then me mine suck.Lol

    Alana

  • 18 years ago

    by Ripple

    Wow really powerfull poem i luv it. xxxxxxxxxxxx lots of love p.s there is always sum1 hu loves u no matter how small u hav always touched sum1's life in sum way

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwh, I really enjoyed reading this.
    It was so very sad but a pleasure to read.
    I thought the rhyming in the last stanza seemed kind of forced but other than that you did a wonderful job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Hmm, awesome, but I 100% know you can do it better! Keep trying!

    #Ayu

    P.S: You have my rating! ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Anime Lover

    Aw thanks Ayumi ^_^ I know I can do better than that and I'm workin on it I appreciate your vote and comment ^_^

    ***Jackie***