Take my place

by sarah   Feb 18, 2006


I tried to be your friend
you never accepted me
it was like i didn't fit in

you said you were jealous of me?
depressed because your moving
that no one will keep in contact.
i thought i would
but why would i even try
you acted as if i never existed
totally passed me by

i wanted to be there for you
you always pushed me away
as if i didn't have any idea
of what to do or say

i know what your doing
trying to over power me
but why would you even try
when i would have given it up to you
i don't want to be superior
i just want a friend.
so take my place
and let us start over again

*so this deff isn't my best piece.. i will have to say it sucks, but im just tired of writing i feel like i cant even write anymore to express myself.. only when it is imaginary* maybe i will work on something better in this situation but i just hope the stress doesn't last that long*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    I actually really enjoyed reading this poem. i infact DO like the rhyme unlike that previous comment lol i think it added to the poem. this poem shows ur kind heart of wanting to help ur friend even though u feel it wasnt appreciated..i dont knoe if this is based on true events but if it is, i hope things work out!:)

  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    Your unconstant rhythm makes it hard to read I gave you a 3/5 because even though it was hard to read it still seemed heartfelt and there was some good things about it such as the grammer and what not