Comments : Hurtful truth

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    That's Realy Deep.. And I Seem To Relate To It. :s It's Realy Realy Good.. You're An Amaizing Writer!

  • 18 years ago

    by Daniell

    Wow....another greatn poems.....good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow. this is so good!

    "Her past she tries so hard to avoid
    From the sea breeze and the tide that swept away all her dreams"

    i love that part. a truly excellent poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by katie hensley

    Very powerful words. you have real talent. keep it up. 5/5
    -k-

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissy

    Is a sad poem but i like. good job5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by timehealsallwounds6

    Very strong and deep words i like it keep up the good work

    timehealsallwounds*