It shows great depth into ur life.. well done .

Wow, i like your strategy on writing poems of the two i have read you sound like you have a lot to say and you can say it in such small words that is truly amazing!! 5/5 i dont think anyone can really criticize this poem or many of your others at all you're a wonderful writer keep it up
-Rachel

Wow sounds like me..i can relate alot to this poem..great job...keep writin ur really skilled...Joc

Loved this poem!! keep it up :)

When I read this poem I think of me bcuz I'm always the one that has to be strong and it's like I'm caring the world on my shoulders and it makes me sad, but your poem is so beatifully written and has so much dept that I had to give it a 5. Great Job!

Wow, I can relate to this a lot. I don't like to show people my weaknesses, I like being strong for me and other people. :) I am a very guarded person when it comes to my emotions, I like to shut people out who care especially my friends. Great job writing this one. It's simple yet it gets the message across to me. 5/5 You're a great writer! Keep it up!

Stephanie

I LOVED THIS ONE! You are a great poet! 5/5!! I'm glad I found you. When I'm in a better mood, I'll r/r/c some more of your poems. Keep up the good work.

As i have seen in almost all of your poems i have read, the rhyming and flow are GREAT! the use of assonance was good also.

definatly 5/5

~Murder.

[always her to laugh,
always her to listen,]
They should be "here" not "here"

[and direct you on the rite path,]
Should be "right" not "rite"

[here 2 be alone,]
Should be "to" not "2"

This was good, I liked the other one better though because it seems you put more effort into that one. You paid attention to grammer and spelling whereas in this you did not. I still liked the poem but that made me hold back a little. Very nicely done though 5/5

Again I see here what I have saw in the last two that I have commented on, so I don't have to leave those same comments again. But you really should consider working on those area's. 5/5

Letty

Wow, really good. I loved it. The flow and the rhymes were great. It was a bit short, perhaps make it a bit longer. Other than that wonderful write.

Peace, Joe

Omgosh..this is soo good..it really creative and i loved the way it all flowed together..only thing: "rite" should be "right"...thats it..5/5

There are a couple of spelling mistakes that need fixing.

i enjoyed this, I thought the flow was a little off in places, but apart from that, it was a pleasure to read.

Yet again another great poem this one is awesome ^-^

At first I thought this was going to be a bit melancholy - like I support you selflessly. But it so much deeper than that and really quite strong and sad.

This was good. It had a nice rhyme to it, and was meaningful and emotional. Watch out for spelling mistakes and grammar though. Despite how well a poem reads, it has to be grammatically correct, too.

Nice! I really like this one. Great rhyming and excellent flow.

UR an awesome poet! Your emotions in your poetry are so strong, the reader themselves can feel it! Great write,
-Ann

I really liked that. it sounds like something i would have wrote a few yrs ago. good job. :) keep writing.

-kay

Aww it's so sad. You seem to write very deep and touching sad poems. It looks like you're best at that 'genre' I guess you could call it. >.< So am I though, so I guess I can't tell you much about that. =P

The poem had great deepness and flow to it. I liked the meaning. It sounds so much like me. Maybe that's why, maybe it's not, I have no idea. Anyways, well done lol. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha