Sleeping with a ghost

by Jeffrey   Feb 20, 2006


Adore my ways
in this dream
of undeserved praise
for the winning team
and hold onto me
as I touch the stars
I wanted you to see
I wasn't concerned with scars

Lower your defense
the tears on your skin
will embrace every sense
you hate when I win
but close your eyes
and reminisce
about the guy
that used to exist

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  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Um. ehh. Didn't like this one a whole lot. The title was nice =)

    -Jennifer. Overall Rating:4.2/5

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I lvoe it but this makes me wonderr howd the ghost come ot be..?? i dont kno if its important and i dont mean to eb a bother but yeah. keep it up ur awesome.

    Lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    Sooo...now i know the story behind it....n i have to say....you are soo hmmm theres no word....something like amazing, and smart, and creative all mixed in one.....its cool how everybody can make their own interpretation.....but yours with the poem is just the most creative thing ever

  • 17 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Great! Poem Jeffrey! 5/5
    P.s. Do i get the points now?!

    XxXN-G-C-SXxX

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    So this means a little something to me.....i dont know why....but it does....you could put this in with 10 poems from 10 other people n ask me which one was yours and i could pick it out......i know you too well.....n its so beautiful to me......the tears on your skin= my favorite line.....when i first read this.....i cried....what else is new.....but seriously......the last line or 2.......thats how i know its you.....haha im sounding like a nut case but its cool......you seriously are really good at this jeffness