Comments : Condemned

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachelle

    This sounds so sad I love it though

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Sad, but well written. I liked it 5/5

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by AntiSocial16

    Absolutely amazing! your writings never seem stagnant. with each one you post, your talent blossoms and flourishes greater than before!
    i especially liked these two lines:
    "You gave me new pain to feel.
    I'm still a slave to what I thought was real."
    its like you were trying so hard to want a thing that was not there, and when it was realized, a feeling so devestating came over you, and the thing was the cause.
    amazing peice! i truly loved it!
    keep writing, and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
    *AntiSocial16*
    ps: if u have aim, please im me sumtime! id love to talk to you! my sn is SmileBackTears