Comments : Feelings of a year

  • 12 years ago

    by Juls

    Its good. I never saw a poem layed out like this one before but i really like the layout of it. keep up the great work.
    ~Juls~

  • 12 years ago

    by Gretchen

    Dido! I liked the layout its very unique and catches my attention. Good job

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    It's still in stanzas, so it is a type of poetry, i have written a few like this, never posted them because i haven't found the time to yet, but i like this type because it gets all of the meotions through without the lengthy lines. I have A LOT of lengthy poems, and i know it drags some readers out to read it all, so this is gd and it isnt time consuming, so its gd, keep up the gd work!
    -Jenna xo

  • 12 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very original peice, and also very effective.

    (would be 5/5 but cannot seem to vote as whenever i try the site logs me out :S )

  • 12 years ago

    by anna

    Very intersted ... good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    Great work. Very unique style. You did an amazing job.

  • 12 years ago

    by holly

    I like this different to most poems but i found it easy to read and well it just well was very effective xxALLYxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Polly

    I like this, it's unique. Love the stylen and layout, very original.
    Polly

  • 12 years ago

    by Allison

    That is a very interesting style to write this in. I really liked it. *5/5*

  • 12 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Good poem Ilike the way you wrote it.I have seen your poem style layout on this website before, it is not commen way of writing but people do use it once in awhile, I don't know the name of it I just know I have seen some peoms layout like this before.

    Anyway good job! loved it

    -Josiah

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha

    Hmm... Love the way you wrote it! Its very unique, the first I've read of its kind... Very nice job!

    sammie

  • 12 years ago

    by daniel

    Nice new writing style, I liked it alot, great job man.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sondos

    Very beautiful work here
    In answer to your question, I don't know if there is a name for this style of poetry i still like it very much

    All the Best
    Sondos

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert

    I like the style its written, its very original. few lines say a lot, and thats what i really like in it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is good! Love how you had the one worded feelings, And then adding on to it. You set it out really well! 5/5 =]

    - natz x0x

  • 12 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I'll admit the reason I chose this poem was because of the title. That's a hook right there. Now I loved the layout especially how your first word in each line connected with the ones after. Really jealous! Keep writing, this one was amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Juls

    We all feel those and about 100+ more feelings! Great work I enjoyed reading. Its one that I havent seen layed out like that.
    *Juls*

  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Awesome poem, I loved it. It was very well written. keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sole

    Pain... when comforting,
    Lost... on answers.
    Helpless... with situaiton,
    Hopeful... of miracle.

    The perfect stanza . . .

    Cornered is spelt with an e not an o though.

    Other than that - very original idea - it worked really well with the meaning. A few parts I didn't like as much, or lines that seemed out of place - but in hindsight, they work just perfectly!

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 12 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Definatly does sum up "feelings of a year" lol.. another good one!