Ohhh perfect perfect! I Love poems that sort out emotions for the reader, it's so much more fun than the normal cliche poems that are all "Mixed emotions" but never really get into what your REALLY feeling! Very interesting write, you definatly have a talent! 5/5

Wow, wonderful idea and very unique! i enjoyed this poem, it was quite refreshing! good job! 5/5

Oh i love this. Did you date this girl? Either way, you captured your emotions very well in this and it's very beautifully written. I can relate to it, except a bit differently cause I'm younger, but I absolutely love this poem. Great job!

I love this poem.. and i love how you use barely any words and still manage to create such a breautiful poem.. the only stanza that doenst flow too well is this one

Pain... when comforting,
Lost... on answers.
Helpless... with situaiton,
Hopeful... of miracle.

I think that this poem describes how so many people feel after they get out of a relationship and the person who they were with gets a new boyfriend/girlfriend. you conveyed all the emotions and did a wonderful job. 5/5