Comments : Two Sisters love

  • 11 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Another good write... You guys are on fire! a sister's love... Great subject, conveyed beautifully!

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Chels my sweet , someday you will be together and share many laughs or ..lols...hahaha
    You and Erisa share a wonderful friendship and sisterhood , one that will never die..

    Keep the faith dear girl , someday you will hug , laugh and see each other's beautiful eyes dancing with joy and sparkling with tears of love ...

    Muah A.I.D love ya much

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    But see you can’t give up on family
    No matter how far they are in the world i loves these lines a lot. wut a lucky sis is she if she got a wonderful sis who could write such agret poem for her 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Oh I love it and what I love most about it is the personalisation of our lil secret jokes and antics that you have enclosed in this beautifully written heart felt peice. I have watched you grow babes, though it be from a distance you have never failed to amaze me and make me proud and I know that will continue as you continue to grow into the amazing young woman I slowly see revealed before my very eyes...never ever doubt my love and my pride in you Chelsey you really do amaze me each and every day sunshine, my only sunshine :O)

  • 11 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    Love it soo much. everytm i c a poem written by u chelsey i read it and always turns out brilliant...keep it up and take care

    Hannah

  • 11 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Wow. I loved this poem. You really managed to capture the essense of the love between two sisters in this poem. Even though i grew up with my sister I can some how relate to how you miss her. Since my sister died three years ago I will always continue to carry her in my heart, as one always should do with family memebers.

  • 6 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    I can fully comprehend the feelings youre having when you wrote this lovely poem. I really do... Anyways, you did a fine job in creating this one. I like it, a lot, actually more than a lot :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Such a beautiful poem of friendship and sisterhood. this bond is very special and rare and I liked how you added in little things that the reader wouldn't truly understand because these little things were between you and your sister.

    It is so hard to be apart from the ones we love and it is even harder when we can't afford the money to see them, talk to them, be with them and do the things we would do if they were closer.

    Your line where you mention the photoshopped pictures Wow, this was powerful, a photo is so precious and we take these for granteed but I am thankful for computers now and the fact we can now make such things.

    I like how you related to the longing for this sister to be there while you were growing up, I think so many girls long for a sister to look up to, but to have one and be so far for them is heart breaking.

    This poem could be related to with so mnay forms of relationships and the distance between them, I am sure many people will relate to this, I know I can.

    Well done, good job :) x