Comments : The Girl In My Dreams

  • 11 years ago

    by Chantelle

    Wow this is really an amazing piece, so sad and full of emotion. The way you ended it was really well done. Great poem
    xxoo

  • 10 years ago

    by Chemistry

    Beautiful though sad, I really like it. I agree with Chantelle, the ending was very well done- it wrapped up the whole poem.