I am sure i've read this before..... that's werid... lol

it's good anyway.

Wow.
Scary.
Lmao.
Great write dear.x

It's a pretty good poem, not much of a nursery rhyme though.. too disturbing =). I'd almost suggest you change trickly to trickling... but whatever suits you.

In a sick way, I loved this poem, rhyme type thing, lol. Nice job.

-Tainted