Comments : Life's Too Short

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    I love this, Simon! So powerful and you really rocked it out! Awesome message! ;o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Nicely put my friend. Life is too short for games and bs. Too bad the world does not operate on this principle. Life would be so much better.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    So truthfully put Simon .....
    If if this poem could touch 10 people there will be 10 wiser people in the world tomorrow ....

    I sincerely hope this one hits the top rated , so more will people will get a chance to understand that life really is to short .....

    Wonderfully written from the heart of a wise man !!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    My sentiments exactly, Simon. Life is way too short. I am both awed and inspired by your audacity to write a poem that some that do the things in the poem would consider insolence.
    It amazes me how people twist things around. Anyway, brilliantly written!

    hugs and smiles,
    Mary

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Simon,
    Just thought I should let you know that I like this poem. It's just so true and the way you wrote it..... I like it, I even let my dad read it... and he agree:

    *****GREAT, WONDERFUL POEM*****

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Woah!
    That's Really Good.. The Rhymes are Great And It Flows Really Really Well.. Well Done Keep It Up Mate!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Fleckney

    Well said my friend I say we start a petition right now to end all games and bullshit all offenders shall be soundly thrashed with limp linguini until such a time as they are too busy laughing to indulge in any more games. Okay enough rambling loved the poem keep it up.
    Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Nice write. Should be posted on all forums to get the message across ... but yet, that would just get some going again. Hopefully peace will reign. Cheers!

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah poe

    Hey well keep up the good worke hope to talk to you soon l8ters sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by shelle

    This poem is class ad so true luved it!!! take a look at mine thankz

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Very cool! I like it! :) Keep up the good work! I hope you submit more!
    (~~crroar)

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    Wow...i really like this poem .... u seeem like u feel strong about wat ur writing... keep it up...ooo n every1 shou;d read this poem its amazing!!! ~jennifer~

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohhh I would have to agree with this poem. Very nice rhymes you have too.

  • 18 years ago

    by May Lee

    Word Simon, word. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by shelle

    I love this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Ûµ.Autumn.Ûµ

    Thats really good. When i saw the title i thought it was going to be about dying but then i read the first line and ...i loved it :P keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    Agree wih ure theme 100%. we need such poems to revive our lives and i loved esp these lines :
    What goes around, comes around,
    I'm sure that's how it goes

    all the best,
    just wishes

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    This poem is very true. Life is too short for all that stuff. The flow in this was great, it didn't have a lot of imagery, but I don't think you were expecting it too? Anyways, I agree with you 100% life is too short for all those things.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    The rhyme here is perfect without sounding forced. The message you are conveying is clear and well portrayed. Your choice of words really is great. Well Done.

    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Simon, "Vanilla Fragrance (Quatern)" so beautifully written.. I could actually smell the vanilla in the air. Awesome poem! ;o)