Veyr good hunn, well expressed...I hope you're ok..-xxx-

Beautiful...
All this time I tried so hard
But I only ever fall
I can def. relate to that. This had a beautiful flow. *hugs*Take care XXXXX JL

This is very good ! i love u and ur poems! keep writing ! hugs-hayley

Gr8 poem very strong i like it alot :)

I luv like all of ur poems they r from the heart and thats wat makes poems great. plz comment on some of my poems!

Thank u for ur sugesstion to my poem if u have anymore plz tell me becuz ur poems are absoulty amazing! ya i started writing like 2 months ago. when i met my bf he inspired me to write, some of my poems r about him and since u like one of mine(which isnt the best one) i have decided to put some more on here! ~valerie

Hun r u back!? :)
well i hope you are..you've been missed.
Awesome poem..i can understand those controversial feelings..you want someone there but so afraid you'll fail them.
Take care of yourself..
Much love xoxoxo

This poem is amazing. all of your poems are. you are so talented with words...you say everything i've tried to say but couldn't figure out how.
5/5
lauren

I would like u to look out my newest poem "The Perfect Picture" and tel me what u think. ~valerie

Thanks thanks!~valerie

Great job! Loved this poem, Mainly cause it did have a sence of hope in it. Hope all goes well for you! 5/5

luv natalie x-x

I really liked that and the way you were searching for hope... I wish luck on what you are seeking. Great write.

Really like this poem. I love the flow it has sort of simple and elegant in one poem. ~red

I can really relate to this whole poem. I first read this poem a few weeks ago while reading your poems and I fell in love with it. The meaning of it really means something to me. I love your writing as well. It's kinda inspired me to write myself. I've gone through a lot and i've been cutting. And just like your poem says about throwing away the knife, i've taken up this whole writing thing as a better way to deal with hurt.