This is amazing.beautiful.i love the part about the glistening crystal tree.nice job

That was really amazing. i was hooked all through the poem. nice job.
Emma 5/5

Oh!!! My, this is a glorious read indeed.
The forever changing universe is a
magnificent never ending painting
full of life.
I like how you included us humans
also in the paintings. Excellent job
and Write On,
Bogie

Let me say, wonderful use of imagery and descriptions throughout this.
First stanza: Great opening, beautiful imagery. I'm not sure if I misread this but to me it seems it would make more sense if on the third line it were "...dominated with black." Maybe split the final line into two? That's up to you.
Second stanza: I could really picture this stanza which is spot on, because that means I am being shown your words rather than you telling me them.
Third stanza: Lovely descriptions again. I think maybe on the second line it should be "glistens." I loved the seventh line it's completely original.
Fourth stanza: Great use of colour, I like how you described the sunset, very subtle, but it worked.
Fifth stanza: I'm not sure about this stanza, it's ok don't get me wrong, just the least favourite of mine in this piece. Maybe because instead of showing like in the previous stanzas you’re telling me about the "painter." In the third line I think it should be "lasts."
Sixth stanza: Inspiring ending, I liked the final line especially, it gave a very thought provoking finish.
Well done, keep writing.

This one had pretty good imagery but still left space for our own imagination which I liked. The ending I personaly did not like that much but it was still a good write.

Wow! You painted a great picture in my head while I read this poem of yours. Great imagery used. Im glad I read it.
*juls*

Wow, amazing Job. This is wonderfully written. It has so much Imagery thoughout. Good Job!

~Joe~

Wow. You have awesome talent. That poem was amazing . . beyond words! Everything flowed so perfectly - and the image was painted into my mind . . literally! Incredible . . .

Peace. [Sole]

Wow. You have awesome talent. That poem was amazing . . beyond words! Everything flowed so perfectly - and the image was painted into my mind . . literally! Incredible . . .

Peace. [Sole]

Beautifully written, great imagry

I love this poem. It's so descriptive..I could just picture it in my mind. You are very talented. Don't ever quit writing cause I truly believe that you are going somewhere with this. This poem was absolutely Beautiful. Great job! 5/5*

Breathtaking, I definately saved the best till last! Absolutely amazing imagery, truely inspired writing. Sunrises, sunsets, snow and sun all beautifully encaptured in just 6 magnificent stanzas, a wonderful write 5/5! x

Good poem. The only advice I would give is to increase your vocabulary. This poem could be that much better if you could give it a boost. Keep writing.

Well this one shows your talent is good. I liked this poem. It was truly amazing, keep up the great work :)

"Moving along the gallery of paintings,
Another canvas glistens for the dying attention.
This simple piece of a freezing ice storm,
Paints a Winter Wonderland that sparkles and twinkles.
An ordinary tree transformed,
Into a glistening crystal tree.
Houses, cars and all visible objects frozen in a shell of ice,
Glittering like diamonds from golden streaks of sunlight.
Rarely was this seen,
Yet a true gem of a scene."

This was my favorite stanza!! It wa swritten so beautifully!! You have alot of talent!! I wouldnt or i guess couldnt change a thing!!! Thanks for your advice on my poems!! I will have to change that "your" thing i never noticed!! Thanx so much!! 5/5!!

Wow.. that was beautifuL! just beautiful.. thats all i can say.. keep it up!
jessy

Wow.. that is so beautiful, i just lovedd it! keep up the excellent work!

A very good poem here. Was long, But was worth reading it all. You always used really good imagery. And the flow was great. A top job on this peice. I really liked it! Keep it up 5/5

`Taleee

"Is most definitely one of his masterpiece."
'masterpieces', since it is 'one of' them.
~~~
I found it interesting that you didn't capitalize 'painter' or 'he', perhaps you didn't want to make it too clear that you were talking about God (if you believe in Him), or some sort of Creator-figure. At first I was unsure if the painter was just a normal person taking in what he beheld, or the person creating it all, with the normal people as the spectators in the gallery, but by the end it was obvious that the latter was the focus of the poem.

Amazing imagery, I loved every line of it. I could see all the colours, you painted such a beautiful image. Awesome stuff!