Wonderful write Bill... Hopeful and uplifting! Well written :)

***Great Poem Bill, Well Done My Friend***

Oh Bill how sweet. I truly hope that happiness follows you whever life may take you. Any woman would be lucky to have you as their mate. Best wishes to you my friend.

Always
--Sher

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

Much love and God bless,
FalLeN*-

P.S: "Standing all my life, leaning into the wind
Alone, always alone, even in a crowd
Facing every challenge with a determined grin"-- Superb.

Greater than great words, absolutely beautiful penned from the heart.

gloria's glen.d

Touchingly heartfelt and oh so beautiful write! You write with such glorifying passion. Truly wonderful!

I love this poem. it reminds me of the way i used to feel about certain things.

Hey! i always enjoy reading your poems! there always so beautiful and say so much! this one was a great write! keep em up!

please look at some of mine and help me! i see you giving a lot of helpful guidence to others! thanks!

So beautiful. i like the way you start out your love poems on a deep, sad note and end it so beautifully - it seems such a befitting end to the agony portrayed at the start.

great work - haven't read your work in sometime and now i know what i missed!

good luck always
shobhana

Wow.. a beautiful piece of work.. i enjoyed ur rhyme scheme.. a little different than those ive read before.. deep words that go straight thru the heart.. keep up the gr8 work
take care
NannO

Hey really cool poem,i think it was sooo cute...
this was my favourite part...

Until that time at the beach finding myself on my knees

Your love wrapping around me and keeping me safe
Pulling me back to shore, drawing me to you
Tenderly holding me on my moonless nights
Showing me how to live and giving me life
I will be honored if you will someday be my wife

take care and rember to shine like the sun with love josie

Wow, it sounds like you have come along ways in your lifetime...many hardships and now a light at the end of the tunnel! I am sooo happy for you and enjoy reading your poems!

I really liked it, good job