This poem was interesting. Have a look at What the Rain Doesn't Wash Away. Thanks

Really a wonderful piece. flowed well and brought home the realities of life. thanks

Wow! this is wonderfully written. so typical of small towns struggling to rise to the megapolises.

somehow, this seems symbolic of our lives too - aren't we all trying to grow, disprove and prove ourselves in someway or the other? that's what this poem brought out for me.

well done on this one!

good luck and peace
shobhana

Very Good Jed and oh so true! Great Flow Great message. Great peom.