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  • 11 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Good poem...used your word talent with this one a little...(ive noticed i mention that in every comment)...its really good...i would like to help you with the title but as you probably know from reading my poems im not that good with names...but meh ill give a suggestion anyways... "To fit in, To be the same" ...i dont know...meh...really good poem...

    --S-S--

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, lovely poem indeed, so tough to help u for the title as i dont think i'll do justice.

    really liked ur poem and a great theme indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Loved it..different but rry good. Keep it up..sry no idea for title.

    Lissa