She rly doesnt appreciate what you've done obviously but *sigh* you jus gotta face the music and i'm proud of you bc ur takn this better then I thought. I kno it hurts bud, and its not not suppose to...but just her she cant take back what shes taken from you and the things she didnt say are hat set you free....good luck LYLAB
Wow. that was so powerful. I don't want 2 say that I really enjoyed it because of the pain in it but I really enjoyed the way u structured it and rhymed it. Well done mate... keep on writing... it heals... *hugs*
AWWWW. that was amazing. truly wowowowow. lol. it reminded me sooo much of this boy i really liked. and he broke my heart. aww. it fit it sooo perfectly. thanks sooo so much for the comment!!
OMG!!! I wanted to cry!!! =[ 8/5!! Wow!!!!! Talk abouyt emotions! Woa there nelly!! lol *winks* No, seriously, that's really deep and veeeerrrry meanigful!! Take Care!! and if ya ever want to talk, holla at me!! =]
Let me be one of the first to say wow. If anyone hasn't told you this already I'm telling you now. You are an amazing poet and a really sweet guy. And any girl that would do something like that to you is unworthy of anyone's time. She should feel lucky she even got to be near you. Truely Amazing! 5/5 Keep it up TBOY! (P.s. Thanks for the comment ;))
Omg! this poem is soooo saad! it made me cry! i just cant beleive it!*hugs* i kno that i cant feel half the pain u do rite now! im soo sorry! i hope with all my heart and soul that the love of your life opens her eyes and realizes that there is no one who can love her the way you do! i hope everythiing turns out ok... ur such a sweet guy!! keep up the gr8 work...i abslutly LOVE ur poems...they have alot of emotions and feelings in them!!
Hey davi. I really loved this one! great use of words for your rhyme scheme. flow was pretty good and well yea... it was just overall a great effort davi!!!! :D keep writing i'll b keeping my eye on you!!!! *hugs* ruthie