Baby doll, that is so sad. E-mail me and let me know who it's about, okay? And did you get my last e-mail? About that guy I hit? Well, I LOVE YOU!

This is an amazing poem thanx for commenting on mine, If anyone is talented it is you keep writing take care hun sarah x

Wow, that was really powerful and sad, It touched my heart and really made me think, I felt I could relate to the person whom the poem was about and sympathise with them, It was well worded and well structured and the form you used though simple worked very well, you are writing well and though you can improve you are doing well already, take care and keep writing and growing in your poetry, well done!

Hotness.... in a sad and cruel kind of way... what inspired you to write this? This is by far one of the best I've seen on this site, probably one of the best I've read period. If possible, could you give me some tips on how to improve my poem 'Deceitful Melodies'? Thanks.

Wow, amazing poem, so powerful, deep and so so sad. I relate to this 101%, you could have written this poem about me....Hope this isn't about you?? It's a terrible pain to go through!!! I really enjoyed reading this poem =0)

Hugs Sabrina - Take care, be strong

Brilliant and deep peice, the last stanza is amazing. really you wrote this fantasticly.

"He has her, the most wonderful girl." maybe having the word "because" at the begining of this line may improve the flow here. that is only a suggestion though as the peice is briliant as it is.

very powerfully written peice. 5/5

Wow amazing...i'm so sorry that your sad. everything will get better and you are appreciated..a lot by your friends. i love you so much.

5/5~

Wow......thats....really good. i completely understand a lot of points it in too. it was a really touching thing that made me realize how i am with myself.....good job. love it

Fantastic! I loved this poem sweety. Nice written, it flows, and I love the sad story it tells. =( Very sad. Well done sweety, proud of you =) Love you lots hun, -xxx-

O...M...G!!!!!!!!!!! this poem is so excellent! it...idk...spoke to me. you are definitly in my favorites!

This is such and amazing poem
So strong and emotional yet very very sad I hope its not true about you or anyone else.
If you wanna talk im just a message away!. =)
Great job on your poem.

Very nice poem..i can so relate to this..poem deep and and very emtionlaly...love it

Wow!! What an amazing poem. Very nice job. I liked the emotion used. I'm very sorry if this had happend to you. If you need someone to talk to, i'm here for you. Again, great job... I loved it!!

This poem is really good. it explains the situation and everything very good. i loved it..5/5**

This poem was very emotional, and you just can't go wrong with emotions, thats why i can't really say anything about editing the formats or nething plus its was all great neways. I love ur rhythem, and how you kept the rhyming scheem...great job..my fav. lines

She's unappreciated with bloodshot eyes,
She's unappreciated and formed of lies.

great read 5/5

OMG. Great poem, It had a really good flow, && it had alot of emotion. I loved it. Keep it up!
5/5 Bec xx

Holy mother of god.

This is the best poem i think i've read in a long time. The long lines make it seem almost like a story i could play in my head.

Abso-friggen-brilliant!

Lvz Me, xxx

I loved the flow.. and i really enjoied the poem. 5/5!

~David

Such wisdom hard won, This is a great poem. Thanks for shairing it.