Comments : Perfection is a Diaster

  • 18 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Julie,
    I..God, I'm near tears. Pansy boy for you.
    I love you. And I know you fear this problem more then anything.
    But Ily, I'm here to listen when needed and here to make you smile when needed/ :]

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hubbster,

    Damn both you and Ian, IM SOBBING! I love you to bits, and I'll be here for you every step of the way. Both Ian and I will be. Your stuck with us =) *hugs*

    No matter what

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    An excellent ending though the spelling is sometimes a little shaky (Who am I to talk! )

    Lettece = Lettuce

    And you have written an where it should perhaps be and.

    Hope this helps

    Peace.

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    *sniff**sniff* i'm near tears, it's such a great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    I love the ending, didn't flow too well in some parts, but it didn't make much difference, I still love it =]
    Keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This poem is very touching. i dont even know what to say..this poem was just amazing.