Its really good:)
Keep it up
~aga~

Nice one ; )

Cool
loved it
brilliant
keep going

sighned rex

I don't know what to say. It's really good. I think it's really hard to follow the rules of a school project...Poems are supposed to be anything the writer makes it. If it has rules how can you let creativity flow? Anyways...great poem, yes sometimes the flow is a little off but other than that it's great.

An interesting concept of poetry - very touching and heartfelt.

Peace.