I used to be sad, but listen to me now!

by imnotlikethem   Mar 6, 2006


I'm not really sure of my true feelings anymore.
It was all so clear and easy to explain before.

But, now it's...just....so hard.
now my heart is permanently scarred.

I still think it's your fault, but you think it's mine.
All I know know is I used to cry over "us" but now I'm fine.

So, whether or not you still care
I'm over it, this I swear.

I'm going to remind you of what you lost,
So, here it is, no matter what it may cost.

my eyes so chocalatly brown, you could melt,
my luscious body you once felt.

my shiny, romanticly wavy dark brown hair,
which is so soft it flows with the air.

I know you can't forget my deliciously, tantalizing lips
you look and I walk away with my great figure and hips.

that's just my really short list.
and to think I was the one you kissed

The last thing I have to say explains itself.
If I wasn't so busy I'd date myself.

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  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Lol.. it took a very unexpected twist at around the middle, and the end was kinda shocking to me.. never saw it coming :P.. well, i lykd ur rhyme, but the flow wasn that gr8.. umm, this isnt reli the kind of poem id read, tho u did a job of letting him noe that ur over him and moving on.. i think u need to change ur title to make it shorter..
    take care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I loved the last line lol it was mean but it was still very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Likke.a.demon!

    Haha! This was amazing!
    I love it, so positive, really inspirational. :]

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowSlayer

    That was mean but it had some honesty to it. i liked it good job

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aww thats mean...good poem though..i guess thats kind of how i felt deep down but i dont love myself that much