Is this goodbye

by complicated situation   Mar 6, 2006


Is this goodbye
i now you'll ask why
why you made me bleed
all for a stupid deed
is that not it
would you like another bit
of a broken life
could i use a knife
or should i just wait
to get another mate
I'll stand in the dark
rite beside the park
to make a pool of blood
to wash away the mud
until i can find
a piece of my mind
where your not there
to stand and stare
to watch me cry
or fall down and die
i could slit my wrist
or use my fist
to feel the pain
just like the rain
always falling down
way to the ground
just like these tears
I'll stand at the peer
waiting to jump
you'll hear a loud bump
I'll travel to space
but never see your face

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  • 15 years ago

    by James

    Great poem. lots of sadness and lots of rhymes. a good beat and rythym. loved it, while at the same time felt sad :) sweet...

  • 16 years ago

    by complicated situation

    Awww Thanx Means A Lot =] x

  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Wow, wow and wow! lolz
    this poem was soooo adorable and perfect!
    I loved the way you wrote it, its very simple and sensitive!
    good work hun, absolutely deserved a 5 ;)
    Keep it up
    Luv U
    NemO x0x0x0x00xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Azure :)

    Awwww, thats sweet but i found it a little sad i love it, i feel i can relate in some way, i wish you all the best and god bless * xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by complicated situation

    Fankoo