Comments : Dinner is served

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Lol sounds good.
    I thought this poem was cute!
    And i also have a sudden hunger for broccoli and cheese. o.O
    LoL!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I'm hungry and I just ate. Have fun..

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    Thanks a lot... now im hungry... :( lol, funny poem. So simple and cute.

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hehe this was cool lol, Made me smile =] And thanx for the comment, And nah it wasnt fictional, It was all true..But anywho 5/5 =]

    - natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    Lol it's pretty cool

  • 18 years ago

    by Juls

    Cute, I never read a funny poem before but I liked it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    Good write.. i think the ending could use work...
    ~David

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Haha, awesome write. I loved it.

    ~Joe~

  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    Lol . . . nice write - they should write all recipe books in poetry :)

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Its cute lol.. dunno what elce to say

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    LoL this made me laugh.. and also made me kind of hungry.. lol. It's really cute. Great job! 5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    A short snappy poem making good use of a very limited line length to give the poem a really racy feel to perfectly suit the idea of a very raced meal! Had me smiling from beginning to end. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Urgg.. wanna eatt! :P haha! and dats strange, cuz i jus ate! lol.. awesum poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Haha. That was cute! I enjoyed it. (=

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    Haha i liked it you described foods and sounds and steps you use to make dinner lol it made me want to cook haha i enjoyed it!

    this is tottaly what i am going through right now.... wow how is your boy taking it though? i love how you tottaly expressed your feelings and still made it sound amazing you have so much talent!

    Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

    -Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    Oh sorry about the last part to the past comment the boy part i accidentally added that it was for a differnt poem.....but read the first part of the comment caust its true!!!

    Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

    -Laura

  • 17 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I thought it was fun, though I might have missed out on what made it funny per se.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Lol, what a meal! mmmm.. lol
    I actually don't mind broccoli much, but with cheese, that's a bit pushy. Great write, thank goodness I ate before hand :P

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    VERY different, but it IS good. Haha. I would have NEVER of thought of writing a poem like that. =D I see you are a very unique writer too. :) Good job.

    >black&&blue

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Nice! I am really enjoying your writing, I will check back frequently