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by Ashleigh Skye Mar 7, 2006
Dark, fantasy /
Looking around this sullen room,
where the people like statues,
Succumbing to the power,
and abandoning their smiles,
The twinkle in their eyes,
that has been long since dulled,
Chained to the floor by hopes and dreams,
blanketed by sorrow,
All the expression in the room is lost,
damned by the turn of a key,
PLZ COMMENT AND VOTE THANX
Hauntingly beautiful. A great write.
Wow, incredible poem, very dark and you expressed emotions greatly. I like the metaphors, powerful atmosphere. Every stanza is so effective and unique and this one has superb wording. Well done!
Oh wow..sadly beautifully written..veryy Dark..but veryy GooD ..I Luved it
U have done a great work..very talented writer..is give u 5/5 ..u deserve it!
by Lesbian Natalie
Ohhhhhh creepyyyyyyy!!!! I give you a 5/5... great job... I have about 80 poems of my own if you'd like to read them....
Perfect, even flow...between all stanzas...
reminds me of modern arabic poetry...only with dark meaning...
depressing really...but moving...
a definite 5/5...=D