The Ghosts of Tomorrow

by Ashleigh Skye   Mar 7, 2006


Looking around this sullen room,
where the people like statues,
don't move.

Succumbing to the power,
and abandoning their smiles,
forever.

The twinkle in their eyes,
that has been long since dulled,
now lost.

Chained to the floor by hopes and dreams,
blanketed by sorrow,
silent screams.

All the expression in the room is lost,
damned by the turn of a key,
silence.

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  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hauntingly beautiful. A great write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, incredible poem, very dark and you expressed emotions greatly. I like the metaphors, powerful atmosphere. Every stanza is so effective and unique and this one has superb wording. Well done!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh wow..sadly beautifully written..veryy Dark..but veryy GooD ..I Luved it
    U have done a great work..very talented writer..is give u 5/5 ..u deserve it!
    -sarah

  • 10 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Ohhhhhh creepyyyyyyy!!!! I give you a 5/5... great job... I have about 80 poems of my own if you'd like to read them....

  • 10 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Perfect, even flow...between all stanzas...
    reminds me of modern arabic poetry...only with dark meaning...
    depressing really...but moving...
    a definite 5/5...=D

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