Rage And Love

Wow. Lots of emotion for someone who's seriously over tired and needs sleep lol. I love it though. Even though it's one you basically wrote first lol. I liked the flow, and loads of emotion. Good job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I like this poem! There's just something about it's deep simplicity, if you don't mind the oxymoron, that catches my eye and my heart.

RAve

Wwoww.. what a powerful write! it really moved me and the emotion was just so strong.. the words you used were excellent and the flow really worked.. and the rhymes didn't have any faults as far as i can see.. in the sixth stanza though, i was just wondering if "anymore" should be lower case? because the rest of the poems first letters of every line is capitalized.. lol.. just checking! 5/5!

I loved this one Nat! It was so good :)

And lucky u.. you have a poem that has lots of comments and votes and all :( lol

Hehe nice poem :P

Wow, amazing Job. This was very well written. You know how to keep the reader interested.

~Joe~