An hour ago...

by J Lau   Mar 10, 2006


Please...
Someone please...
Please turn on the light.
I see shadows moving around,
But nothing appears quite the same.

It's so dark in here,
Why doesn't anyone turn on the light?
What time is it now?
I thought we just finished breakfast.
Please answer me... Someone.

I remember walking in the park...
Just after my morning coffee.
I remember it was a clear blue sky.
I strolled along the thick green grass,
And watching the children play.

On my way back home,
A car ran a red light and struck me.
I remember so many people around me,
Asking if I was alright.
I remember telling them that I'm o.k.,
Stood back up and walking back home.

That was an hour ago...
I know my eyes are as wide as they can be,
But why can't I see?
What is happening to me?
Why is everything so dark and grey?

Life was full of colors and joy only yesterday,
Now it's dark and cold.
Why did this happen to me?
Images now exists only from my memories,
... just less then an hour ago.
My life...
Will never be the same...
Anymore.

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** This poem is fictional and was written for a forum contest. **

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  • 16 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Mysterious! I looove it!

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    I loved this one. it was amazing. the emotion was brilliant & it is sooo sad

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww. i find it really hard to write fictional poetry, so well done, this was amazing. i loved it

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    Awww thats sad did she die? i liked this poem a lot it was very well written 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, I just realized I've read this poem too many times, and each time seemed different yet the same.. Sorry J. Lau