Comments : After the sunset- his promise (collab)

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wonderful stuff to the both of you! You are very lucky to be working with Eddie :P I think he is cool.. haha great stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Awww Chels this collab brings a tear to my eye ....You both have done an incredible job on this collab .
    Such a heartfelt piece.....
    Love ya A.I.D MUAH !!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by im ur AdDiCtiOn

    Great poem keep it up.

    ~ beautiful love~

  • 18 years ago

    by im ur AdDiCtiOn

    Great poem keep it up.

    ~ beautiful love~

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I piece you know I can relate to all to well Chelsey - and I actually showed this to my Dad because he was there for me though alot of my abusive relationship and I know how much it broke his heart to see me go through that ... it was real this poem it spoke to me it was actually kinda like you were telling my life story of a few year ago - great write for you and Eddie well done to two terrific poets :o)

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow this is really good, really unique theme, just loved it.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by blas

    Good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie

    This is a really good poem. You two should work together more =3
    Great work.

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  • 17 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    WELL DUN AWESME POEM I LOVE IT. BRANG A TEAR TO MI EYE. VERY POWERFUL, THOUGHTFUL, AND GREAT. KEEP IT UP ND TAKE CARE

    HANNAHXOXO