Edit it its asys mistake of u life it suppose to be your life

Another good poem. your getting the message across v. clearly with what you doing. its good.

That was good. loved the ending!! 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Wow VIRUS OF LOVE titled sounds very interesting to read very nice poem well, good luck i know u have the talent 4/5

Only hapens to people who
((Happen))

Now, I liked the beginning on this poem, but the ending, to me, was poor. I'm sorry this is harsh, but I really didn't like the poem. There was no flow and the format seemed broken-- I was pausing in places it felt odd to pause at. Sorry.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

Oh wow. i like this one a lot. its really good. you have a very good message in here. keep writing 5/5

Wow, u r too good, honestly u are so great ...........5/5