5 long Months

by Juls   Mar 11, 2006


Month number 1: The sun always shined, the days were long but I knew all in time you would you would come home and live your life.

Month number 2: I was the one grandchild who took care of you. Feeding you,Bathing you,Sleeping by your side

Month number 3: I started to cry, I wanted to be a normal teenager not living at the hospital every single night

Month number 4: I started to get used to the fact that living with you was my second home.

Month number 5: I still didnt give up hope but the day I didnt stay with you...you went away for good

5 long months that I stayed by your side

5 long months that I always was there

5 long months I grew to know you better

5 long months I will never forget

5 long months I said I needed a day to myself

That one day I wanted..I got.

That one day I wanted..you died reaching for a breath

Pop-I love you. 1/17/20- 7/10/04

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Possibly the most unique poem I have seen on this site - or ever! I'm so sorry if it's a true poem - Just keep on smiling :) 5/5

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by †Undone♥

    Whoa... did this really happen?

  • 18 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    SO SO SO SADDDDD :( very well written tho

  • 18 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    Oh thats a sad poem, my condolences for your loss. i liked the unique layout, don't feel that u feelin lyk u needed time on your own was in any contribution to this sad situation, its admirable the time u dedicated

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow great poem. i loved it. you expressed you feelings in a very unique way. 5/5.