Comments : Only Laughing On The Outside

  • Omg i loved this poem..describes me at school alot....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephy

    Wow that sounds exactly like what I'm going through. great job -xxx-

  • I luv thiis poem and i no EXACTLY how y0o feel, u took the words right out of my mouth, remember im always here 2 talk dnt feel u cnt c0z its good 2 vent s0metimes, luv y0o always maddy...keep shining...u r such a great writer

  • 18 years ago

    by Bethan

    Awwww wot a sad yet sadly true poem, I can totally relate to this 1. beautifully written, flawless rhyme n flow, a brilliant piece!! 5/5.
    Love
    Beth xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Sad and heart wrenching! Beautifully written :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow this is soooooo good!!! I love it. I cant believe how good this is... so sad. I loved it. I am so happy you wrote another one... I was missing your touching words. Thanks, loved it!!!

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by FireCracker

    OH MY GOSH !! I loved this poem. Gr8 Work!! Keep It Up! 5/5 !! Check out my poems, if you get the chance! THNKS!

  • 18 years ago

    by FireCracker

    OH MY GOSH !! I loved this poem. Gr8 Work!! Keep It Up! 5/5 !! Check out my poems, if you get the chance! THNKS!

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    This Poem Is Full Of Emotion.. And Is Quite Sad..
    It's Got Good Rhymes.. And A Good Flow.. well Done

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow!! I know exactly how you feel. Great job!!! lots of luv! Amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    Ah the grief and misery of one misunderstood. I can relate to this poem, as I'm sure most people can.

    Well done

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Mysterious and full of grief. this poem brings the question of why people hide their pain. the masks and the walls they erect around themselves seem to hurt people more. you've done an exquisite job to remove the mask of false identity and reveal the naked truth of pain. perfect.

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Wow you know i loved it so much and i feel the same way i really really loved it keep up the great work!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    So sad, but so beautifully written! The flow and rhyme to this poem is very smooth, love it! Awesome writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    OH WOW!!!!!! Your poetry never ceases to amaze me. You must possess strong feelings about the subjects of which you write. I don't think you could write so beautifully otherwise. Astoundingly incredible! Your poetry always is.

    love and best wishes,
    Mary

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Oh wow... this is so me. Loved this poem from top to bottom. Excellent job indeed.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kurt

    Bravo! Great poem and i loved the way it flowed. Everything was so well put together it was ingenious. Absolutely Amazing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jonathan

    This poem is flippin awesome...I love it, five by five! You are a good writer and its the same as it seems all of us are going through. But this poem rocks!
    Jon

  • 18 years ago

    by MaGs

    Luv it! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by RegretedPast

    I love it, this poem is like my life, nice one