Comments : A lonely heart and sad

  • 18 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    It's good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Quite a strange poem about depression and death, but of course strange means original so it's all good. I liked your use of diction throughout the poem too. Only criticism is I lost the flow on the first line of the seventh stanza. Keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I liked the word choice and yes as someone say a strange *Though unique* poem about depression. And here unique can only mean wonderful and excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    It is beautiful, but i doesnt seem to flow very well. but i like it. some of the images are powerfull and deep. good job.