Comments : DIRGE

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Brilliant as always. I really have to catch up on your stuff.
    This piece just breaks my heart. I can really relate to much of what you've said.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    This is so beautifully tragic - a soul stirring piece of poetry and a bitter revelation of life.
    the emotions seem to pour out so well - it left me with this heavy feeling in my heart.

    just a small suggestion - i thought the word "damn" in the last stanza seemed a olloquial in this otherwise perfect peice - although it does bring out the frustration well.

    hope you are ok. do take care.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Mitch

    When a poem can actually make you feel the writers emotions like that, its truly a work of art. Very nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    I did so love this piece. especially the second stanza
    every street i go down
    is a cul-de-sac of emotion and memories
    that leaves me no exit for escape.
    have truelly felt that way myself.